Be Mine If You Can
Be Mine If You Can
I always wished you in my most loved dreams, i don't know what kept me linked to you, just a thing, be mine if you can......
Even if i wish i can't get rid of your impressions, i don't know what kept me attached to you, just a thing, be mine if you can......
All my senses wants to make you aware of the feelings that they feel, just a thing, be mine if you can...
trust me if you can, its just a simple process, have faith
I need you to just keep a calm hand on my shoulders, if some how we lost touch.
just a calm hand, that's what matters, that's what I believe.
those beautiful eyes covered behind shades didn't allowed me to read them, but as I said I always believed.
Be mine if you can....
~Kalash
I think its really cute how you just simply express yourself , but in order to write better you must learn to creatively deliver your expression
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really i can, i appreciate they way you helped me thanks for the feed back
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ReplyDeleteInstead of just going along w the flow, which seems like being honest when you’re starting to write, compile your thoughts and combine them after processing the connection between two chains of thoughts. It will not only keep the readers engaged but will also improve your writing procedure.
ReplyDeletesure, will imply all the above suggestions thanks for this kind feedback
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